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  • Can you give me some feedback please

    Hi everyone can you give me some feedback on my site please, im still tweaking

    https://www.whitlockwoodendesigns.com/
    Handmade Writing Implements
    https://www.facebook.com/WhitlockPens/

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    I like it a lot! I love the items you make and think they are very well priced, the site is easy to find your way around also, I think the idea of a pen of the month is fantastic and I love the fact you give information about the woods

    Sharon
    http://hearnsharon.blogspot.co.uk/

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    • #3
      Originally posted by SharonH View Post
      I like it a lot! I love the items you make and think they are very well priced, the site is easy to find your way around also, I think the idea of a pen of the month is fantastic and I love the fact you give information about the woods

      Sharon
      Thanks Sharon. Its still work in progress im not happy with the front page and think it needs more content but that stuff develops over time i guess
      Handmade Writing Implements
      https://www.facebook.com/WhitlockPens/

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      • #4
        On the whole, I like the site - it's nice and clean and easy to use.

        A few suggestions, if they're any help...

        On the home page, maybe take out the info about you and put that in an 'About' page. Also, break up the information into paragraphs as that will make it much easier to read.

        Instead of writing 'i', it should be a capital 'I'.

        Instead of the main photo on the home page that you're using, maybe it should be a photo of some of your pens, so that customers can see straight away what you're offering.

        Some of the photos are a bit dark, you could maybe look into further developing your photography. You could also think about how they could be styled in a more contemporary way? Photography is something that I have always struggled with so it is an ongoing battle to try keep getting better. I think that I am... (I hope!)

        I hope that helps. And if not, please ignore!

        Emma.
        Paperbuzz
        Adding a little magic to your celebrations


        www.noths.com/paperbuzz

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        • #5
          Thank you very much for the comments Emma. The info about me I will do as you suggest when I can get something to fill the front page, the banner I think I am keeping as I do all sorts of Woodwork, maybe in time I will change it to something that reflects all.
          The photography is a point well taken and one I struggle with, with one hundred and thirty different pens I plan to replace the bad photos as I remake the pens cause at the moment there is so much to do with redoing them at the moment.
          Thank you very much.
          Handmade Writing Implements
          https://www.facebook.com/WhitlockPens/

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          • #6
            Overall, I like the site - it's nice and clean and easy to use. It is still work in progress im not happy with the site before and thought it needed a lot of content but it is developed over time, i guess

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            • #7
              Thank you. I think it has come on in leaps and bounds, it's still along way from perfect but I have a list of things to tweak and do. Some things I have to compromise on because I lack the technical skills.
              Handmade Writing Implements
              https://www.facebook.com/WhitlockPens/

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              • #8
                it's same like landing page, it's simple for shop

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